tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7460022147348194197.post8675650813302133257..comments2023-03-25T03:14:07.245-06:00Comments on The Joe and Jill Chronicles: Joe and Jillhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00365820310256081882noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7460022147348194197.post-49607599495677007092010-11-08T16:38:04.094-07:002010-11-08T16:38:04.094-07:00Tiff I wish the poem was that deep... Repetitive ...Tiff I wish the poem was that deep... Repetitive statements really. Just all random thoughts as I'm writing the poem. I just like to keep the same format. :) So when I write the poems they are what I'm thinking at that exact moment, then the thoughts are gone. :)Joe and Jillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00365820310256081882noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7460022147348194197.post-28297005329621964132010-11-08T11:02:38.163-07:002010-11-08T11:02:38.163-07:00I am really thinking about this poem and trying to...I am really thinking about this poem and trying to understand your thoughts. In my limited poetic knowledge, are you trying to say that you feel like something is missing in your life because you have a missing leg and a missing middle name? Or is the repetitive statement about your missing middle name alluding to the missing leg. I really like that if that is what you are trying to say. Again, I am not an expert, just your loving cousin interested in your views! <br />Keep writing poems! I love them.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05178497784193285626noreply@blogger.com