Saturday, November 6, 2010

I am a girl with one leg standing.
I like to stay positive but sometimes I'm not very productive.
I love music.
I hate bad moods.
Why don't I have a middle name?

I am a girl with one leg standing.
I created a support group for amputees.
I have two members who aren't active in the group.
I ate Chinese food tonight.
Why don't I have a middle name?

I am a girl with one leg standing.
I like to write my poems.
I don't really like Chinese food.
I'm going to stay up way late tonight.
Why don't I have a middle name?



JJBean

2 comments:

  1. I am really thinking about this poem and trying to understand your thoughts. In my limited poetic knowledge, are you trying to say that you feel like something is missing in your life because you have a missing leg and a missing middle name? Or is the repetitive statement about your missing middle name alluding to the missing leg. I really like that if that is what you are trying to say. Again, I am not an expert, just your loving cousin interested in your views!
    Keep writing poems! I love them.

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  2. Tiff I wish the poem was that deep... Repetitive statements really. Just all random thoughts as I'm writing the poem. I just like to keep the same format. :) So when I write the poems they are what I'm thinking at that exact moment, then the thoughts are gone. :)

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